From 1ebd4211a4909f67b4fe50f87becf2c301530c5c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jeff Arnold Date: Sun, 28 Oct 2012 15:40:38 -0400 Subject: [PATCH] Revisions to privacy policy and terms of service (imported from commit 6f618c858a7c5b53d86a6c032fb7089521c62eb7) --- templates/zephyr/privacy.html | 122 +++++++--------------------------- templates/zephyr/terms.html | 27 ++++---- 2 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 111 deletions(-) diff --git a/templates/zephyr/privacy.html b/templates/zephyr/privacy.html index 4f60114bb4..42411a815d 100644 --- a/templates/zephyr/privacy.html +++ b/templates/zephyr/privacy.html @@ -9,15 +9,10 @@

Privacy Policy

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Last modified: October 25, 2012

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Last modified: October 29, 2012

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There are many different ways you can use our services – to search for and -share information, to communicate with other people or to create new content. -When you share information with us, for example by creating a Humbug Account, -we can make those services even better – to show you more relevant search -results and ads, to help you connect with people or to make sharing with others -quicker and easier. As you use our services, we want you to be clear how we’re -using information and the ways in which you can protect your privacy.

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As you use our services, we want you to be clear how we’re using information +and the ways in which you can protect your privacy.

Our Privacy Policy explains:

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  • The choices we offer, including how to access and update information.
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    We’ve tried to keep it as simple as possible, but if you’re not familiar -with terms like cookies, IP addresses, pixel tags and browsers, then read about -these key terms first. Your privacy matters to Humbug so whether you are new to -Humbug or a long-time user, please do take the time to get to know our -practices – and if you have any questions contact us.

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    Information we collect

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    We collect information to provide better services to all of our users – from -figuring out basic stuff like which language you speak, to more complex things -like which ads you’ll find most useful or the people who matter most to you -online.

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    We collect information to provide better services to all of our users.

    We collect information in two ways:

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  • Information you give us. For example, many of our services require you to sign up for a Humbug Account. When you do, we’ll ask -for personal information, like your name, email address, telephone number or -credit card. If you want to take full advantage of the sharing features we -offer, we might also ask you to create a publicly visible Humbug Profile, which -may include your name and photo.

  • +for personal information, like your name, email address, or telephone +number.

  • Information we get from your use of our services. We may collect information about the services that you use and how you use them, -like when you visit a website that uses our advertising services or you view -and interact with our ads and content. This information includes:

    +like when you interact with our content. This information includes: