From 5df48dd4d0fae545a0cee23e367eb49cc2b18f70 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alex Vandiver Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2024 18:12:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] docs: Remove an "e.g." when we have explicit steps. --- docs/production/upgrade.md | 12 ++++-------- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/production/upgrade.md b/docs/production/upgrade.md index d0feab85ec..bcaab7ae4d 100644 --- a/docs/production/upgrade.md +++ b/docs/production/upgrade.md @@ -313,10 +313,8 @@ instructions for other supported platforms. /home/zulip/deployments/current/manage.py backup --output=/home/zulip/release-upgrade.backup.tar.gz ``` -3. Switch to the root user and upgrade the operating system using the - OS's standard tooling. E.g., for Ubuntu, this means running - `do-release-upgrade` and following the prompts until it completes - successfully: +3. Switch to the root user and upgrade the operating system, following + the prompts until it completes successfully: ```bash sudo -i # Or otherwise get a root shell @@ -378,10 +376,8 @@ confirm everything is working correctly. /home/zulip/deployments/current/manage.py backup --output=/home/zulip/release-upgrade.backup.tar.gz ``` -3. Switch to the root user and upgrade the operating system using the - OS's standard tooling. E.g., for Ubuntu, this means running - `do-release-upgrade` and following the prompts until it completes - successfully: +3. Switch to the root user and upgrade the operating system, following + the prompts until it completes successfully: ```bash sudo -i # Or otherwise get a root shell