From 9252b3f336c2f2ccee2948d7ea7a143a14a577c8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jessica McKellar <jesstess@zulip.com>
Date: Tue, 4 Feb 2014 15:08:09 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Refine initial invite page language.

(imported from commit e7d4fcb065af8bfd9496471958f671552efa9a60)
---
 templates/zerver/initial_invite_page.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/zerver/initial_invite_page.html b/templates/zerver/initial_invite_page.html
index 45f993c569..2e4809de12 100644
--- a/templates/zerver/initial_invite_page.html
+++ b/templates/zerver/initial_invite_page.html
@@ -20,13 +20,13 @@
 
 <h1 style="margin-top:30px;">You're the first one here!</h1>
 <p>
-  They said this was some sort of group communication tool, so you probably have some people you want to chat with.
+  Let's invite some folks for you to chat with:
 </p>
 <div id="invite_rows">
     <form id="invite_form">
     {% csrf_token %}
     <div class="invite_row"><input name="email_1" class="invite_email" type={% if not invite_suffix %}"email"{% else %}"text"{% endif %} /> {% if invite_suffix %}@{{invite_suffix}}{% endif %}</div>
-	<p id="invite_blurb">(We'll email invitations to these people so they can revel in the joy that is Zulip.)</p>
+	<p id="invite_blurb">(We'll email invitations to them)</p>
     <div class="alert" id="invite_error" style="display: none;">
     </div>
     <button id="submit_invitation" class="btn btn-primary" data-loading-text="Next">Next »</button>