From cb998f7147842a38c33ee0418255948e4d1a7821 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Tim Abbott <tabbott@zulip.com>
Date: Mon, 26 Jul 2021 09:34:12 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] templates: Copy-edit new landing pages.

---
 templates/zerver/for-education.html | 15 ++++++++++-----
 templates/zerver/for-events.html    |  2 +-
 templates/zerver/for-research.html  |  2 +-
 3 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/templates/zerver/for-education.html b/templates/zerver/for-education.html
index f34393e741..e6bd4adc91 100644
--- a/templates/zerver/for-education.html
+++ b/templates/zerver/for-education.html
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
                     </li>
                     <li><div class="list-content"> Questions and answers are easy to find, so each question is only asked once.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Refer to relevant points by <a href="/help/link-to-a-message-or-conversation">linking to a message or a topic.</a></div></li>
-                    <li><div class="list-content">Keep discussions orderly by <a href="/help/rename-a-topic">moving</a> or <a href="/help/move-content-to-another-topic">splitting</a> topics when conversations take a turn.</div></li>
+                    <li><div class="list-content">Keep discussions orderly by <a href="/help/rename-a-topic">moving</a> or <a href="/help/move-content-to-another-topic">splitting</a> topics when conversations digress.</div></li>
                     <li><div><a href="/help/resolve-a-topic">Mark the topic ✓ resolved</a> when done!</div></li>
 
                 </ul>
@@ -119,10 +119,14 @@
                 <ul>
                     <li>
                         <div class="list-content">
-                            Use <a href="/help/emoji-reactions">emoji reactions</a> for a quick pulse check.
+                            Use <a href="/help/emoji-reactions">emoji
+                            reactions</a> for lightweight
+                            interactions. Have fun
+                            with <a href="/help/add-custom-emoji">custom
+                            emoji</a> and gather feedback
+                            with <a href="/help/create-a-poll">polls</a>.
                         </div>
                     </li>
-                    <li><div class="list-content">Gather students’ preferences with built-in <a href="/help/create-a-poll">polls.</a></div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Hide answers behind <a href="/help/format-your-message-using-markdown#spoilers">spoilers</a>, letting students think before they read.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Share lecture notes and reading materials with drag-and-drop file uploads.</div></li>
                 </ul>
@@ -156,7 +160,7 @@
                     Flexible administration and moderation
                 </h1>
                 <ul>
-                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip offers dozens of features for <a href="/help/moderating-open-organizations">moderating the discussion.</a></div></li>
+                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip offers dozens of features for <a href="/help/moderating-open-organizations">moderating discussions.</a></div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Assign permissions to course staff with <a href="/help/stream-permissions#detailed-permissions">fine-grained settings</a> for <a href="/help/roles-and-permissions">administrators and moderators.</a></div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Make an announcement stream where only course staff <a href="/help/stream-permissions#public-streams">can post messages</a>.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Quickly add staff and students to the right streams. Automatically subscribe users <a href="/help/set-default-streams-for-new-users">when they join</a>, subscribe a <a href="/help/user-groups">group of users</a>, or copy membership from another stream.</div></li>
@@ -214,7 +218,8 @@
                             With <a href="/apps">apps for every platform</a>, you can check Zulip at your computer or on your phone.
                         </div>
                     </li>
-                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip alerts you about urgent messages with <a href="/help/stream-notifications">fully customizable</a> mobile, email and desktop notifications.</div></li>
+                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip alerts you
+                    about timely messages with <a href="/help/stream-notifications">fully customizable</a> mobile, email and desktop notifications.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Mention <a href="/help/mention-a-user-or-group">users</a>, <a href="/help/mention-a-user-or-group#mention-a-user-or-group">groups of users</a> or <a href="/help/pm-mention-alert-notifications#wildcard-mentions">everyone</a> when you need their attention.</div>
                     </li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Use Zulip in your language or choice, with translations into <a href="https://www.transifex.com/zulip/zulip/">17 languages</a>.</div></li>
diff --git a/templates/zerver/for-events.html b/templates/zerver/for-events.html
index 5b4f08e636..a085f430b9 100644
--- a/templates/zerver/for-events.html
+++ b/templates/zerver/for-events.html
@@ -237,7 +237,7 @@
                             required.
                         </div>
                     </li>
-                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip alerts participants about urgent messages with <a href="/help/stream-notifications">fully customizable</a> mobile, email and desktop notifications.</div></li>
+                    <li><div class="list-content">Zulip alerts participants about timely messages with <a href="/help/stream-notifications">fully customizable</a> mobile, email and desktop notifications.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Mention <a href="/help/mention-a-user-or-group">users</a>, <a href="/help/mention-a-user-or-group#mention-a-user-or-group">groups of users</a> or <a href="/help/pm-mention-alert-notifications#wildcard-mentions">everyone</a> when you need their attention.</div></li>
                     <li><div class="list-content">Zulip works reliably for organizations
                     with thousands of users online at once.</div></li>
diff --git a/templates/zerver/for-research.html b/templates/zerver/for-research.html
index 66aa870145..44c9a384ef 100644
--- a/templates/zerver/for-research.html
+++ b/templates/zerver/for-research.html
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@
                         <div class="list-content">
                             Zulip offers dozens of features
                             for <a href="/help/moderating-open-organizations">moderating
-                            the discussion</a>. Members can
+                            discussions</a>. Members can
                             also <a href="/help/mute-a-user">mute</a> anyone they'd rather
                             not interact with.
                         </div>